Dear Deep Dark Secrets


Dear secrets of someone I revered,

Why did I stumble across you? You were better locked up in the attic of his mental abode, safe and snug.

Life was definitely better before you decided to throw yourself at my face , made me squirm on the terror splashed floors of dismay, and pushed me into the deep abyss of shock and horror of what I had just witnessed.

My world flipped in a moment and any comprehension of it faded away. I dashed off to my bed and crashed on my pillow. I don’t even know when I had drifted into the world of nightmares while my trusty pillow had soaked up all my tears of despair.

I woke up with start , and Oh! how much would I have liked it to be dawn already. Alas! It was only evening and my heart shuddered at the thought of having to spend a whole night battling the aftermath of my heartbreaking discovery.

There’s one thing that gives me solace though, that he doesn’t know that I know you. I don’t have the courage to confront him and make things even worse .

I prefer to live with the harrowing truth buried deep in my bosom , eating away at my soul till the last shred of me gleams with the horror of that moment, that moment when I stumbled upon his deep dark secrets and all hell broke loose…..

All for the sake of him….

Regards ,

Yours Truly.


17 Comments Add yours

  1. Shree Nayak says:

    Great yarr…! But…does this refer to the after effects of an imaginary nightmare u had??
    Ur words n vocabulary r superb yarr! Hw did u do that? Help me plz….I m very poor in vocabulary. The writing is great👌😊

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    1. Soumya says:

      no dear, this is me imagining myself in the place of a person who has discovered some secrets about a person she respected and loved , and is disturbed by her discovery.


  2. Carolyn Page says:

    Well done, Soumya! I enjoyed that to the last word.
    “You were better locked up in the attic of his mental abode, safe and snug.”
    I think this is the crucial line… It leads the reader to appreciate you’ve found a ‘secret’… 🙂

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    1. Soumya says:

      thank you so much❤ this means a lot☺🤗

      Liked by 1 person

  3. Megan says:

    So so so very relatable! I can totally relate and imagine the thoughts that go on in someone’s mind in this particular situation,, a war of hearts.

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  4. You captured the intensity of the despair and regret beautifully. I think it’s better to know, but how painful. Well done.

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  5. I absolutely love your style of writing! It’s so unique👌🏻

    Liked by 1 person

    1. Soumya says:

      thanks a ton❤❤


  6. Whats the answer soumya?

    Liked by 1 person

    1. Soumya says:

      i tried , but i literally have no idea😶


  7. It is indeed a crazy feeling when you realise that someone that you respect highly is not who they seemed to be…it is a tale as old as time itself, but yet you tell it it a modern way that is so refreshing! Kudos!

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    1. Soumya says:

      thanks a lot🤗🤗

      Liked by 1 person

  8. Tricia says:

    Soumya, you are a fantastic writer. The way you string together words to bring emotions from vibrational energy into 3D. I enjoy your work.

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